Thursday, June 01, 2006

இன்னொரு காதல் கதை

என்னையா நீ காதலிக்கிறாய்
ஆமாம்! அப்படித்தான்!

என் காதல் கறைபட்டது
இருக்கட்டுமே

உன்னை பாட சொன்னால் ?
பாடுவேன்

உன்னை துய்க்க நினைத்தால் ?
ஒரு சைகை போதுமே

நம்மிடையே ஒரு சுவர் எழுகிறது
உடைப்பேன்

ஒரு முடிச்சி?
அறுத்தெறிவேன்

உன்னை நான் கொன்றுவிட்டால்
மரணம் இனிப்பானது

இன்னும் என்னை காதலிக்கிறாயா?
ஆமாம்! ஆமாம்!

உன்னை ஒரு போதும் என்னால் காதலிக்க முடியாது
ஏன் அப்படி?

நான் அடிமைகளை காதலிப்பதில்லை!

courtesy: anonymous

17 comments:

Sasiprabha said...

I couldnt get the exact meaning of the word LOVE(Kaadhal) yet.. I read somewhere about love: "Why i'm loving you is you can do something what i love, you can give something what i need, you can assist me where i need.. Why i love you is, i love my needs that you can satisfy.."

Syam said...

Kathaiya? Kavithaya? :-)

kuttichuvaru said...

wonderful!!

Bala.G said...

mmmm....kaadhal-la idhellam sagajam....

ROBBIE said...

Bharani,
Whos this anonymous guy? I enjoyed this immensely. Very true!! why would anyone want to love his slave!! hmm! adimai I love that word, love only happens between equals does it? A point to ponder dude!

Shuba said...

Love slavery?????????????mmmmmmmmmmmmmm thinking ........i have never been a slave then

Admirable Existence said...

I just stepped into your blog today and found your poem impressive.
Just felt the following lines as an answer to this poem of yours...
(sorry for non-availability of tamil font)

Naan un adimai enbadhal en kaadalai niraagarikkirai nee!
Aanaal
Nee en ejamaanan enbadhal un niraagarippai kooda manathaara etrukkolgiren naan!
Unmel enakulla kaadal mattum en kurayavey illai?

please ignore if u didn't like these lines...

ROBBIE said...

admirable existence,
admirable indeed! whoppers! that was an amazing reply...
ehehehe! poor thingie, is very much in love. Yeah! I do believe that love transcends all physical, emotional barriers.

Ms.Congeniality said...

Very different :-)

மு.கார்த்திகேயன் said...

Wow..Awesome..Only these type of kavithais are coming very rarely

Known Stranger said...

hmm purindhu puriyamallum orr post

Bharani said...

@sasi...kadhal-nale ore confusion thane...so unga confusion thappe illa :)

@syam...the same confusion continues..

@kuttichuvaru...thanks:)

@bala....correct-a sonnenga...vera enna enna kadhal-la sagajemnu sonnenganne..kadhalikaravangaluku usefulla irukum

Bharani said...

@robbey...i am also the same opinion...things will become wierd if you live with a person who always says yes to you...

@shuba....seekiram slavery-la enter aga vaazhthukal :)

Bharani said...

@Admirable Existence....It was not written by me...but ur lines perfectly finishes it in a positive note...good attempt dude.

@Ms...enna abubhavama :)

Bharani said...

@karthik....thanks :)

@known stranger....ellam andha chithan seyal...:)

Seenu said...

unmaithan.....good one

Bharani said...

Thanks seenu :)